2/2 diary (tired day)

1. I went to church today.

2. There is a birthday party.

3. So after worship we eat tukbokye and kimbab.

4. And I go home, to finish every home work.

5. I finish home work at 3:30 am.

6. I'm very tired so I'm going sleep when I lie down.

7. Today was so tired to me.

8. next time I do my home work early.

1. I went to church today.

---Correct sentence

2. There is a birthday party.

---There was a birthday party.

3. So after worship we eat tukbokye and kimbab.

---So after the worship/service, we ate tteokbokki and kimbab.

4. And I go home, to finish every home work.

---Then, I went home to finish all my homework.

5. I finish home work at 3:30 am.

---I finished it around 3:30 AM.

6. I'm very tired so I'm going sleep when I lie down.

---I'm very tired. I will fall asleep as soon as I lie down.

---I'm very tired. I will fall asleep as soon as I hit the pillow.

7. Today was so tired to me.

---It's a very tiring day.

8. next time I do my home work early.

---I will do my homework early next time.