My family vacation

Dear Jeong-hye Lee

This fall, I am going to go camping with my family.

We are going to spend lots of time at the campsite, so I will pack camp chair.

We also want to sleep out doors, so I will pack tent.

I am excited to build a campfire!

I will pack snacks to share at night.

I can't wait to all these fun activities with my family with my family!

Do you have any exciting plans this fall?

Best, Soi

Dear Jeong-hye Lee

This fall, I am going camping with my family.

We are going to spend lots of time at the campsite, so I will pack camp chair.

We also want to sleep out doors, so I will pack tent.

I am excited to build a campfire!

I will pack snacks to share at night.

I can't wait to all these fun activities with my family!

Do you have any exciting plans this fall?

Best, Soi

 

Note: I found your composition quite interesting. You did well with your tenses. I just remove some not so important words. Keep it up!