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Imagine that your friend found a wallet on the way to school.

Imagine that your friend found a wallet on the way to school.
What can you say to your friend?
When my friend found a wallet on the way to school, I will say " You need to find the owner of the wallet or the owner will be very sad.

What reasons can you give to convince your friend to do the right thing?
I have three reason to give to my friend,
1. I would say consider the person who lost the wallet's position
2. I'll talk to him " that is very bad thing. Stealing someone's money is ilegal.
3. We have an obliagaion to do good things.

How can doing the right thing change the world?
Like when everyone keep the things that is on the road or ground, and then everyone will not believe each ohter and everyone need to worry about there every things and world will be not peaceful and silence. So went everyone find owner of the thing on the ground. The world will be very peaceful.

Imagine that your friend found a wallet on the way to school.
What can will you say to your friend?
When my friend found a wallet on the way to school, I will say " You need to find the owner of the wallet or the owner will be very sad."

What reasons can you give to convince your friend to do the right thing?
I have three reasons to give to my friend,
1. I would say consider the person who lost the wallet's position
2. I'll talk to him " that is very bad thing. Stealing someone's money is ilegal.
3. We have an obliagaion obligation to do good things.

How can doing the right thing change the world?
Like when everyone keeps the things that is are on the road or ground, and then everyone will not believe each other and everyone needs to worry about there their everything and world will be not peaceful and silence silent. So went everyone finds the owner of the thing on the ground. The world will be very peaceful.


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