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Imagine you want to run for class president.

Who are you and what is your goal?
I am Leo and I am good at swinmmingI make friends easily and I am kind to my friends. I have many kind friends too. My goal is making class fill with laugh and make our class clean and be best class in the school.

Why should your classmates vote for you?
there is three reason why I need to be class president.
Reason1 : I could help classmate by helping friends problem or what they can't do. They can have problem t can't be telled to other friends and I can hear the problem and solve it.
Reason2 : I can be friends of who doens't have any friends or I can make two friends get friendly to each other. And I could make very good class.
Reason3 : When I bcame a class president, I'll play with friend who don't have any friend to play with and I could give things that friends forgot

What changes do you plan to make for your school?
I will do mfun activities that kid would like and studying can be hard so I'll give math, English, science quiz. Students can study with fun and they will remember what they learn. It will be more good to rememeber than just sitting on the chair and give up studying. If student lose, they will learn and learn and learn and till they know exacly.

Who are you and what is your goal?
I am Leo and I am good at swinmming. I make friends easily and I am kind to my friends. I have many kind friends too. My goal is making class fill with laugh and make our class clean, and be best class in the school.

Why should your classmates vote for you?
There is are three reason why I need to be class president.
Reason1 : I could help a classmate by helping friend's problem or what they can't do. They can have a problem that can't be telled told to other friends and I can hear the problem and solve it.
Reason2 : I can be friends of those who doens't have any friends or I can make two friends get friendly to each other. And I could make very good class.
Reason3 : When I became a class president, I'll play with a friend who don't doesn't have any friend to play with and I could give things that friends forgot

What changes do you plan to make for your school?
I will do fun activities that kids would like and studying can be hard so I'll give Math, English, and Science quizzes. Students can study with fun and they will remember what they learn. It will be more good to rememeber than just sitting on the chair and give up studying. If student lose, they will learn and learn and learn and till they know exacly.


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