My first english essay "Interesting"

I am interested in traveling in Canada. Because we trip many cities in canada. We went Whistler and Vancouver. Whistler is very amazing. Also, in Vancouver there is my aunt. She lives in Vancouver. I am really happy my aunt lives in Vancouver because i think we can go many times in canada. In canada I met my new friends. Their names are Sumin and Suhyun sisters. I really miss them. Also we went to swimming pool at that time.That swimming pool is very fun adn excited. I hope we can go that swimming pool again. Also, we picked blueberrys and raspberrys. My brother picked blueberry very much. We ate blueberrys and raspberrys very much. That blueberrys and raspberrys are very delicious and sweet. I hope we can go canada and whistler again!

It was so interesting to travel in Canada, because we visited many cities. We went to Whistler and Vancouver. Whistler was very amazing. Also, in Vancouver, my aunt was there. She lives in Vancouver. I am really happy that my aunt lives in Vancouver because I think we can go there many times. In canada, I met my new friends. Their names are Sumin and Suhyun, they are sisters. I really miss them. Also, we went to swimming pool at that time.That swimming pool was very fun and exciting. I hope we can go with that swimming pool again. Also, we picked blueberries and raspberries. My brother picked blueberries very much. We ate blueberries and raspberries very much. That blueberries and raspberries are very delicious and sweet. I hope we can go to Canada and Whistler again!