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Think about all the things you can do with a cell phone or smartphone

Is allowing students to bring their phones to school helpful or harmful?
I think allowing students to bring their phones to school is harmful.

What are the effects?
The effect of 'phones is harmful' is three things. First, It can make student's concentrate hard to there class.
Then, When they bring phones to school, they can lose it or get broken. They can use it at studying time.
Finally, They can do bad things to there friends when they do games at school and lose.

would you bring your phone to school? Why or why not?
I'll not bring my phone to school. because friends can do fight with who will do phone first. or because I think phones are use to call when there not going to home. But I go to home when school is over and it is a short way from school to my home. So I will not bring it

Is allowing students to bring their phones to school helpful or harmful?
I think allowing students to bring their phones to school is harmful.

What are the effects?
First, It can make student's concentration in class difficult.
Then, When they bring phones to school, they can lose it or it can get broken. They can use it at studying time.
Finally, They can do bad things to their friends when they play games at school and lose.

Would you bring your phone to school? Why or why not?
I'll not bring my phone to school. because friends can fight with who will use the phone first.Or because I think phones are used to call your parents to inform them that you will not be home on time. But I go straight home when school is over and it is only a short distance from my home. So I will not bring it.


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