1.If I were a president,First,I will give a rest for people.
2.Second,I will give some money for people.
3.Third,I will make safer school.
4.Fourth,I will game for subject.
5.Maybe childrens like that target.
6.Fifth,And I made a resting place.
7.And I will make safety korea.
8.Sixth,I will make a emergency food providers.
9.And you can rest in between at work.
10.In the school I will make choose the meal service.
11.And I will make free electric bill.
12.My target is ended.Is it good?
13.My target is peaceful and happy.
14.Please choose me for a korea president.
15.Thank you to listening my target.
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2.Second,I will give some money for people.
3.Third,I will make safer school.
4.Fourth,I will game for subject.
5.Maybe childrens like that target.
6.Fifth,And I made a resting place.
7.And I will make safety korea.
8.Sixth,I will make a emergency food providers.
9.And you can rest in between at work.
10.In the school I will make choose the meal service.
11.And I will make free electric bill.
12.My target is ended.Is it good?
13.My target is peaceful and happy.
14.Please choose me for a korea president.
15.Thank you to listening my target.
-END-
Correction:
If I am a president, first, I will give a resting time for people.
Second, I will give some money to people. (or you can choose to say, I will give aid to people.)
Third, I will make a safer school.
Fourth, I will make games as a subject. Maybe children will like that idea.
Fifth, I will make a resting place, and I will make Korea safe.
Sixth, I will make emergency food providers. And you can rest in between at work. In school, I will make choose the meal service.
And I will make an electric bill for free.
These are all my platforms. Are they good?
My goal is to make Korean life peaceful and happy.
Please choose me to be a Korean president.
Thank you for listening to my ideas if I will be a president.
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Note:
Hello, Rooney is this a speech. If it is, there's no need to write numbers in each line. Take note also of the coherence of your speech. If it's written in the future tense, ideas that follows it should be written in future tense, too.
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