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Think about a time when you put on a performance for a crowd

1. What did you do to prepare?
- First, I write down the thing that I will speech, and then talk in mirror few times, and next, I speech front of my families, and Think there audience.

2. How did you feel during the performance?
- I feel so nervous that I almost forget what to say. But after few seconds later, I was speaking well I can!
I was very Shocked and suprized and when times went faster, my mouth was moving faster too.

3. How did you feel after it was over?
- I was very pleased that I didn't make many of mistakes and be a poor speaker. And I was proud that I did well.
And then I felt calm down when mine was over.

1. What did you do to prepare?
- First, I write down the thing that I will speech, and then talk in mirror few times, and next, I speech front of my families, and Think there audience.

CORRECTION: 1. What did you do to prepare?

- First, I write down the thing that I will speak, and then talk in the mirror a few times, and next, I speak in front of my family, and think they're my audience.

 

2. How did you feel during the performance?
- I feel so nervous that I almost forget what to say. But after few seconds later, I was speaking well I can!
I was very Shocked and suprized and when times went faster, my mouth was moving faster too.

 

CORRECTION: 

-I felt so nervous that I almost forgot what to say. But after a few seconds later, I was speaking fluently already. 

I was very shocked and surprised when times went faster, my mouth was moving naturally too. 


3. How did you feel after it was over?
- I was very pleased that I didn't make many of mistakes and be a poor speaker. And I was proud that I did well.
And then I felt calm down when mine was over.

 

CORRECTION: 

- I was very pleased that I didn't make any mistakes and becoming a poor speaker. And I was so proud of myself that I did well.

After that, I felt calm when mine was over.


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