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I’ve regretted not to go study abroad sometimes. I’ve envy people who studied overseas in young age. After graduated to university, I passed in one try at teacher qualification test and then I started work immediately. In fact, many people envy my life and my parents were really proud of me that time. But I had feeling that I miss something. I really needed to my own time to think my life. I entered university what I want in one try, passed very difficult exam in one try and I had very stable job that other’s very envy. Everything went too smooth. I’m not sure that’s why I gave up my job in young age. Because of my good job, I have my house, my car and some accounts in young age. That’s why I could quit my job. If I live in simple life, I don’t need to earn money. I already prepared for my old age. I’ve studied Chinese for 10 years in Korea but I felt that some limitation to improve. But my Chinese made a surprising improvement in China after a year. That time I realized that for studying other languages must go their countries to live. If I will live in English country, my English will improve a lot. When I went to China, I thought if I went to China or other countries in younger age than now it would be nice. Maybe I have more opportunities to start new challenges. Some of my friends who went to abroad in university are still not stable in their job. So they envy me. If we get one, we should give up one. Actually I’m still,young. I can try everything what I want. Today is the youngest day of my life. It’s the fastest when you think it’s late.

I’ve regretted not to go studying abroad sometimes. I’ve envy those people who studied overseas in at a young age. After graduated ing to university, I passed in one try at teacher qualification test and then I started work immediately. I passed the licensure exam to become a professional teacher then, I started working immediately. In fact, there aree a lot of many people envy my life who envies me and my parents were really proud of me that time. But I had feeling that I miss something. I really needed to my own time to think my life. I have to think about what's missing in my life. I entered university what I want in one try,  which I wanted to be in at once, then I passed very difficult exam in one try at once. I had very stable job that other’s very envy. are jealous of Everything went too smooth. I’m not sure that’s why I gave up my job  in at a young age. Because of my good job, Due to my occupation, I have my house, my car and some accounts  in at a young age. That’s why I could quit my job. If I live in simple life, I don’t need to earn money. I already prepared for my old age.retirement I’ve studied Chinese for 10 years in Korea but I felt that some limitation to improve. I'm still lacking at some point. But my Chinese My knowledge about the Chinese language made a surprising improvement in China after a year. That time I realized that for studying other languages must go their  thatcountries to live and to excel more.. If I will live in an English-speaking country, my English ability will improve a lot. When I went to China, I thought if I went to China or other countries in younger age than now it would be nice. Maybe I'll have more opportunities to start new challenges. Some of my friends who went to abroad in university are still not stable in their job. So they envy me. If we get one, we should give up one. Actually I’m still,young. I can try everything what I want. Today is the youngest day of my life. It’s the fastest when you think it’s late.



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