2. it's a story about a man writing a cartoon
3. The daughter like rap
4. he was an agent, but after he fell into the the sea,he star draw cartoon
5. At first,he was unpopular and then paint his story in cartoon.
6. then be come very popular,but after the incident it was fight against the villain
7. Later,i draw cartoon while getting along with family.
8. At first,it was just that but it was fun to see.
9. I thought lose the fight at first but glad won.
10. I highly recommend this movie.
1. The last movie I saw was Hit Men.
2. it's a story about a man writing a cartoon
3. His daughter likes Rap.
4. He was an agent, but after he fell into the the sea, he starts to draw cartoon
5. At first, he was unpopular and then paint his story in cartoon.
6. Then he became very popular, but after the incident it was fight against the villain
7. Later on, he drew cartoon while getting along with his family.
8. At first, it was just that but it was fun to see.
9. I thought he lose the fight at first but glady he won.
10. I highly recommend this movie.
Hello, Kevin!
I am actually curious about that movie. Tell me about in our class. Anyway, there are corrections I made for this compostion. Kindly check them out. Also, you can write a composition in paragraph form like this;
The recent movie I saw was Hit Men. It's a story about a men who writes a cartoon. His daughter likes Rap. He was an agent, but after he fell into the sea, he started to draw cartoons. At first, he wasn't popular, but he drew his story in the cartoon and that's when he became popular. There was a scene that he fought against the villain. Then later, he drew a cartoon while getting along with his family. At first, it was just fun to see and I thought he would loose the fight, but gladly he won. I highly recommend this movie.
