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Hi, Charm!!!
I re-write salary report, again.
please check this report not yesterday's report.

==============================================================================================================================

I added last year monthly salary-slips and summary in the attached file.

Before I tell you my salary information, I want to say one important thing.
Current our company is under legal management and the verge of bankruptcy.
So when we received a monthly salary, we should return a portion of a salary to help the company.
But this is also a part of my salary.
You can see this as red letters or red circles in the attached file.

Current salary informations :
- only basic annual salary
- no performance salary.
- free meal served in the company's restaurant
- return a portion of salary to help company.

Here is the summary.
In last year, received salary is \67,449,580.
return salary is \5,954,300.
Total last year salary is \73,403,880.

Thanks,

Hi, Charm!!!
I re-write salary report, again.
please check this report not yesterday's report.

==============================================================================================================================

I added last year monthly salary-slips and summary in the attached file.

Before I tell you my salary information, I want to say one important thing.
Current our company is under legal management and the verge of bankruptcy.
So when we received a monthly salary, we should return a portion of a salary to help the company.
But this is also a part of my salary.
You can see this as red letters or red circles in the attached file.

Current salary informations :
- only basic annual salary
- no performance salary.
- free meal served in the company's restaurant
- return a portion of salary to help company.

Here is the summary.
In last year, received salary is 67,449,580.
return salary is 5,954,300.
Total last year salary is 73,403,880.

Thanks,

CORRECTIONS:
Hi, Charm!!!
I re-write my salary report.
Please check this report and not the one that I sent you yesterday.

==============================================================================================================================

I added my last year monthly salary-slips in the attached file.

Before, I'll tell you my salary information, I want to say one important thing.
My current company is under legal management and the verge of bankruptcy.
So, when we received our monthly salary, we should return a portion of our salary to help the company.
This portion is also a part of our salary.
You can see this in the red letters or red circles in the attached file.

My current salary informations: 
- only basic annual salary
- no performance salary
- free meal served in the company's canteen/cafeteria
- return a portion of salary to help the company.

Here is the summary:
Last year, I received 67,449,580.
Then, I returned 5,954,300 to help the company.
My total salary last year was 73,403,880.

Thanks.

 


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