Why is it broken... It didn't open from outside or inside.
My friend arrive now, but she can't come in.
Our teacher, my friends,, everyone is tired that day.
Next time, I hope the door never break>
40 minutes later..Teacher opened the door for her power!!
It's a mercy..
Today, our English acadamy's front door has broken. Why was it broken? We couldn't open from the outside and inside. My friend arrives, but she could't come in. Our teacher, friends and other people were tired that day. After 40 minutes, our teacher was able to open the door with all her strength. It's a mercy! I hope the never won't break again.
Hi, Min!
What an experience you had! All of you might been really scared that time. Anyway, I have some corrections for your composition. Kindly check them out. Thank you. Great job!
Kath :)
