I like songpyeon.
And, In Chuseok, we do ganggangsulae ( traditional Korean circle dance play).
I didn't played ganggangsulae before.
But I want to try it.
Besides that, we plat tug-of=war and do New Year's bow.
Bye Bye~~~
In Korea, people make seogpyeon for Chuseok and I like it. Also, we do ganggangsulae, a traditional Korean circle dance play. I haven't played it ganggangsulae yet, but I want to try it. We play tug-of-war and do New Year's bow as well. Good bye!
Hello, Min!
This is very interesting, I get to learn more of your tradition and culture that you do on Chuseok. You were able to deliver your ideas and experiences through writing pretty well, however there are still some mistakes that I noticed. First, you have to make use of pronouns, so you won't have to repeat the same words in every sentences. Next one is, it is okay to use parenthesis when you want to give meaning or explanation to work, but you can also use a comma (,), that will indicate that you are writing more explanation about the word. Lastly, when you talk experiences whether you have done it or not, you can use present perfect tense of the verb.
Keep up the good work!
Kath :)
