Which country I wan to go

1.Iwant to go to Austraila and Guam.

2.Cute koala and kangaroo are in Austraila.

3.There are kiwi bird and emu too.

4.Guam has beautiful and wonderful ocean.

5.When can I get there?

1.I want to go to Austraila and Guam.

2.Cute koalas and kangaroos are in Austraila.

3.There are kiwis and emus, too.

4.Guam has beautiful and wonderful oceans.

5.When can I go there?

 

Hi, Ruby! 

           Those are beautiful countries and I hope you can go there someday when is everything is okay.  You are able to express through writing, however there are some minor mistakes that I have found. You have to use plural form when you talk about nouns in general. 

            You can also write like this;

            I want to go to Australia and Guam. Cute koalas and kangaroos are found in Australia. There are kiwis and emus, too. While Guam has beautiful and wonderful oceans. When can I go there?

            Keep up the good work!

 

Kath :)