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1. Whom do you admire the most?
- Of course I admire my parents the most, but if I have to choose somebody outside of my family, I would choose one woman who was my boss. She was always care all member of staffs, and led us to perfect way whatever the problems are.
- when she had a award from the company for the previous year’s outcome, she wanted to share the success and all the benefits of award even though I already quit the job. She never forgot her employees’ efforts.
- I learned what is real leadership also how to care my employees and a lot of problem-solving abilities from her. For this reason, I would like to be just like her when I become a leader.

2. Tell us about your family.
- My family consists of my father, mother, older brother and me. I lived in seoul with all of them. My father operates furniture factory, and my mother and brother help his business. Since I was a kid, making something like small bags, button was very familiar because I liked to imitate what they do. I think that’s why I liked to make something and wanted study art.


tnx Jennifer :)

1.    Whom do you admire the most? 
- Of course I admire my parents the most, but if I have to choose somebody outside of my family, I would choose one woman who was my boss. She cares all the members of staffs, and lead us to perfect way of solution to whatever problems are. 

When she had an award from the company for the previous year’s outcome, she wanted to share the success and all the benefits of the award to all of us, even though I already quit the job. She never forgot her employees’ efforts. 

I learned what is real leadership also how to care to employees and a lot of problem-solving abilities from her. For these reasons, I would like to be just like her when I become a leader.

2. Tell us about your family.
- My family consists of my father, mother, older brother and me. I lived in Seoul with all of them. My father operates furniture factory, and my mother and brother help his business. Since I was a kid, making something like small bags or buttons were very familiar to me because I liked to imitate what they do. I think that’s why I liked to make something and wanted to study art.


tnx Jennifer :)


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