2.Becase couin,grandma,uncle birthday.
3.I give mail and toy. birthday song.
4.And sing
5.I'm exciting and happy.
6.Couisn like my birthday preent.
7.I'm very pround
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1. My uncle, aunt, couin came to my home.
2. Because it was my cousin, grandma and uncle's birthday.
3. I gave them mails(letters) and toy and I sang a birthday song.
4. And sing
5. I was excited and happy.
6. My cousin likes my birthday preent.
7. I'm very proud.
Hello, Lucy!
You did great in telling this story through writing, however there are some corrections I made. You have to be careful on the spelling of words when you write. Also, you have to use simple past tense of the verb when you are narrating a story that already happened. Please the corrections and you may write your composition like this;
My uncle, aunt and cousin visited our house because it was my cousin, grandma and uncle's birthday. I gave them mails/letters, toys and I sang a birthday song. I was excited and happy, because my cousin likes my birthday present. I was very proud.
Keep on improving your writing skills! You can do it!
Kath :)
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