Because that day is last summer vacation day in fifth grade, and my friend moved another apartment.
We met on 7 p.m , we eat chicken for dinner.
Then we watched a movie, and play board game.
The board game was funny.
Next day, we read a book in the bookstore, and play in playground.
Bye~~
Last week, I had a pajama party with my school friends, because that is the last day of our fifth grade's summer vacation and my friend will move to another apartment. We met at 7 p.m. We ate chicken for dinner, then we watched a movie and played a board game. The board game was funny. On the next day, we read a book at the bookstore and played in the playground. Bye~
Hello, Min!
That sounds like a fun, I'm pretty sure you had a good time with your friends.
Since you wrote a narration or an experience you had in the past, you must keep in mind to use simple tense verbs in your sentences. Also, I told you in your class to use the preposition at before an exact time. I commend you for using sequence adverbs, to elaborate the sequence of events that happened that day. Goof job!
Kath :)
