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When Lisa was going to the bathroom, she saw the BLACKPINK Lisa hiding behind the bathroom. When Lisa saw her face to face, she noticed that the BLACKPINK Lisa does not look like what she saw on internet. She looked way older... Lisa knew at that moment that she needed to help her or PINKBLACK would loose a member! “Hi, I am from another dimension to help you. I have a plan, if you follow it, you can have your dream come true” “Please help me get my young face back. Please.....” After BLACKPINK Lisa calm down, Lisa took BLACKPINK Lisa to her sister who was waiting in the first floor. Lisa told BLACKPINK Lisa to wait with her sister Lana and that she promises her that she will bring her pretty face back. BLACKPINK Lisa understood and she agreed going to the magic dimension and have her dream come true. and come back to work on her come back stage. BLACKPINK Lisa and Lisa made a deal. Tomorrow, Lisa would pretend that she is the REAL Lisa and practice her dance and vocal. The last day of practice, the REAL BLACKPINK Lisa will practice her dances and vocals and she will be on her first come back stage. And she will live happily with her pretty face.

When Lisa was on her way to the bathroom, she saw BLACKPINK's Lisa hiding behind the door. When they got to see a clearer view of each other's face, Lisa noticed that BLACKPINK's Lisa does not actually look the same on what's being published in the internet. She apparently looked way older. Lisa knew at the moment that she needed to help her otherwise BLACKPINK  will lose a member! "Hi, I came from the other dimension to help you. I have a plan. If you follow it, you'll have your dream come true." "Please help me get my youth face back. Please..." After BLACKPINK 's Lisa calmed down, Lisa took her to her sister who was at the first floor waiting for them. Lisa told BLACKPINK  Lisa to wait with her sister Lana. She made a promise to her that she wll help her look young again. BLACKPINK  Lisa understood and agreed going to the magic dimension to have her dream come true. A deal was made between the two of them. Tomorrow, Lisa will pretend as BLACKPINK's Lisa. She will practice her dance and her vocals. On the last day of practice, the REAL BLACKPINK's Lisa will appear to practice her dance and vocals to prepare for her first comeback stage. She will then live happily with her pretty face. 


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