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23rd. April. 2015
I'm writing this dairy for the first time in a long time. I'm taking off from school and academy. But I regret it. It makes me not study hard. I just have been watching YouTube videos and reviewing what I learned at my academy.
Anyway I have good news. I got a final letter for Canada working holiday visa!! I'm going to leave this summer. I'm worried about my family but I can't forget it for my future. What I'm worried about most is my English skills. But I want to believe that I can do everything for now. Next Friday, I'm going back to my academy. I hope that my English skills are improved for this month! Anyway I decided to change my name yesterday. I heard 'ail' of my former name means 'sick'. That's why I changed it to Ally! Hahaha😀 It's Alice's nickname. I like my new name ♥️

23rd. April. 2015
I'm writing this dairy for the first time in a long time. I'm taking off from school and academy. But I regret it. It makes me not study hard. I just have been watching YouTube videos and reviewing what I learned at my academy.
Anyway I have good news. I got a final letter for Canada working holiday visa!! I'm going to leave this summer. I'm worried about my family but I can't forget it for my future. What I'm worried about most is my English skills. But I want to believe that I can do everything for now. Next Friday, I'm going back to my academy. I hope that my English skills are improved for this month! Anyway I decided to change my name yesterday. I heard 'ail' of my former name means 'sick'. That's why I changed it to Ally! Hahaha😀 It's Alice's nickname. I like my new name ♥️

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23rd of April 2015

I'm writing this diary for the first time after a long period of time. I'm taking off from my school and academy and I regret it. It makes me not to study hard. I'm just watching Youtube videos and and reviewing what I learned at my academy. 

Anyway, I have a good news. I got a final letter for Canada working holiday visa! I'm going to leave this summer. I'm worried about my family but I can forget it for my future. What I'm worried about the most is my English skills. But I want to believe that  I can do everything for now. Next Friday, I'm going back to academy. I hope that my English skills will improve this month. Anyway, I decided to change my name yesterday. I heard "Ail" which is my former name means "sick". That's why I changed it to Ally! Hahaha! It's Alice's nickname. I like my new name.


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