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Could you tell me a bit about yourself?
Hello. My name is Jinnyeon Kim and It means live a life helping people.
I just graduated from Kyemyeong university as a major of American studies. In this major, I learned the U.S language, culture, literature, history, politics and economics. Based on the knowledge, I would like to help people who have difficulties with cultural difference as my name meaning.
My parents are very busy when I was child, so they wanted to raise me strong. They took me to TaeKwonDo since when I was 8. I think that is why I can endure well when I suffer from hard time. If I have a chance to work U.S NPO as a intern, I can handle difficult situation with patience.

What have you been doing since you graduated?
I have been worked part time 2 months to make money for WEST program(This is the name of internship program). I have also been studied Computer Application Ability to get certification for working in office.

Why did you choose the major that you did?
I chose American studies because I like English. When I was young, English was my favorite subject. I wanted to learne more specific about what I was interested.
I could choose English Language & Literature for studying English but I didn’t. It’s because I could learn various thing from American Studies. I could learn politics, history, culture, economics as well as English language and literature. I believed that I have a lot of possibilities so I didn’t want to miss the chance to learn widely. Since American Studies learn various thing, I chose it.

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Could you tell me a bit about yourself? Hello. My name is Jinnyeon Kim and It means live a life helping people. I just graduated from Kyemyeong university as a major of American studies. In this major, I learned the U.S language, culture, literature, history, politics and economics. Based on the knowledge, I would like to help people who have difficulties with cultural difference as my name meaning. My parents are very busy when I was child, so they wanted to raise me strong. They took me to TaeKwonDo since when I was 8. I think that is why I can endure well when I suffer from hard time. If I have a chance to work U.S NPO as a intern, I can handle difficult situation with patience. What have you been doing since you graduated? I have been worked part time 2 months to make money for WEST program(This is the name of internship program). I have also been studied Computer Application Ability to get certification for working in office. Why did you choose the major that you did? I chose American studies because I like English. When I was young, English was my favorite subject. I wanted to learne more specific about what I was interested. I could choose English Language & Literature for studying English but I didn’t. It’s because I could learn various thing from American Studies. I could learn politics, history, culture, economics as well as English language and literature. I believed that I have a lot of possibilities so I didn’t want to miss the chance to learn widely. Since American Studies learn various thing, I chose it. This board doesn't accept many contents.T_T ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- Corrections: Could you tell me a bit about yourself? Hello. My name is Jinn eon Kim and it means live a life helping people. I just graduated from Kyemyeong university major in American studies. In this major, I have learned the U.S language, culture, literature, history, politics and economics. Based on the knowledge I learned, I would like to help people who are having difficulties with cultural difference as my name means. My parents were very busy when I was a child, so they wanted me to grow strong; they took me to Taekwondo class when I was 8 years old. That’s why I think I can endure well whenever I’m suffering from hard time. If I have a chance to work for U.S NPO as an intern, I can handle difficult situations with patience. What have you been doing since you graduated? I had worked as a part-timer for 2 months to make money for WEST program (This is the name of internship program). I also studied Computer Application Ability to get a certification to work in an office. Why did you choose the major that you did? I chose American studies because I like English. When I was young, English was my favorite subject and I wanted to learn more about the language. I could have English Language & Literature for studying English but I didn’t, because I could learn various things from American Studies. I could learn politics, history, culture, economics as well as English language and literature. I believed that I have a lot of opportunities so I didn’t want to miss the chance to learn widely. I can learn various things from American Studies that’s why I chose it.

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