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I went on vacation to Hawaii with my husband last year. We stayed a luxurious hotel next to the Waikiki beach.
I could see ocenview throgh the window. It's so amazing and fascinating.
We went swimming, fishing, snorkeling, sightseeing. The weather was super perfect. We took interesting of food, building, natural photoes. I went for a walk on seaside at night. There were crowed and a variety of music, performances. It's more wonderful than I was imagining.
I spent much money on shopping last day of our travelling.
I was into shopping those day. My husband and I both had shopping in common. We made a shopping list in detail before go travelling. I got along well with my husband while we were travelling. Especially, last day was the best. I bought many things what I want to. I'm sure I'll really cheap for myself, and do whatever save money next month.

I went on vacation to Hawaii with my husband last year. We stayed a luxurious hotel next to the Waikiki beach.
I could see ocenview throgh the window. It's so amazing and fascinating.
We went swimming, fishing, snorkeling, sightseeing. The weather was super perfect. We took interesting of food, building, natural photoes. I went for a walk on seaside at night. There were crowed and a variety of music, performances. It's more wonderful than I was imagining.
I spent much money on shopping last day of our travelling.
I was into shopping those day. My husband and I both had shopping in common. We made a shopping list in detail before go travelling. I got along well with my husband while we were travelling. Especially, last day was the best. I bought many things what I want to. I'm sure I'll really cheap for myself, and do whatever save money next month.

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I went on a vacation to Hawaii with my husband last year. We stayed in a luxurious hotel next to the Waikiki beach.

I could see the ocean view through the window. It's so amazing and fascinating.

We went swimming, fishing, snorkeling, sightseeing. The weather was super perfect. We took an interest in food, building, natural photos. I went for a walk on the seaside at night. There were crowed and a variety of music, performances. It's more wonderful than I was imagining.

I spent a lot of money shopping on the last day of our travel.

I was into shopping for those days. My husband and I both had shopping in common. We made a shopping list in detail before going to travel. I got along well with my husband while we were traveling. Especially, the last day was the best. I bought many things that I want to. I'm sure I'll find cheap things to buy for myself and do whatever to save money for next month.


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