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Almost a month ago, I have started to study English using telephone.
One day When I drank a cup of coffee in the cafe near my house,
a woman was talking English fluently in front of my seat.
I thought that scene. “Wow! I want to speak English fluently like her! I envy you.
I decided to study English.

Before I should have been study English to go to famous University in South Korea.
Just it was forced to me. But now it is different.
I want to study English for me.
In addition when if I go to trip alone, I want to speak English fluently without anyone helping.

In the frankly , When I’m talking with Chloe teacher, I want to express my opinion
but it was so hard to me yet. So when I confused how to express my opinion I’m using this sentence. Sorry.....
Fortunately teacher understood what I want to talk

Forward I will study English hard.

Almost a month ago, I have started to study English using telephone.
One day When I drank a cup of coffee in the cafe near my house,
a woman was talking English fluently in front of my seat.
I thought that scene. “Wow! I want to speak English fluently like her! I envy you.
I decided to study English.

Before I should have been study English to go to famous University in South Korea.
Just it was forced to me. But now it is different.
I want to study English for me.
In addition when if I go to trip alone, I want to speak English fluently without anyone helping.

In the frankly , When I’m talking with Chloe teacher, I want to express my opinion
but it was so hard to me yet. So when I confused how to express my opinion I’m using this sentence. Sorry.....
Fortunately teacher understood what I want to talk

Forward I will study English hard.

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Almost a month ago, I have started to study English using the telephone. One day when I was drinking a cup of coffee in the cafe near my house, a woman was talking English fluently in front of my seat. I thought that scene. “Wow! I want to speak English fluently just like her! I envy her" so I decided to study English.

I should have been studied English before I went to famous University in South Korea. Just it was forced to me. But now it is different. I want to study English for my self.  Also when if I go on a trip alone, I want to speak English fluently without anyone helping. 

Frankly speaking, when I’m talking with teacher Chloe, I want to express my opinion but it was so hard for me yet. So when I'm confused about how to express my opinion I’m using this word "Sorry....." Fortunately, the teacher understood what I want to say.

I will study English hard.

 

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