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Hello, Miss Amanda

I'm preparing the passion project.
So I wrote the text for the project.
please check the grammar and spelling mistakes of my passion project.

the title is 'the What is Dat Pilkey'

What was Dav Pilkey’s Real Facts?
Dev Pilkey is an American children's writer and illustrator best known for his Captain Underpants book series. He was born David Murray Pilkey Jr. on March 4th, 1966 in Cleveland, Ohio, to David and Barbara Pilkey. He attended elementary school in Elyria, Ohio, where he was diagnosed with can’t read long sentence with ADHD. Because he was often reprimanded for his behavior he spent a lot of time at a hallway desk. This is where his Captain Underpants character was created. As a student he entered his first book titled World War Won in a national contest and won. Part of the prize was having his book published, in 1987. His many had published.

What is Dav Pilkey’s book?
Dev Pilkey’s book were famous international book. Which is Captain underpants and Dog Man. But there is more book it’s Mighty Robot, Ook and Gluk, and Super Diaper Baby. Early years book have lot much than international book!

Why do I like Dav Pilkey’s book?
I really like Dev Pilkey’s book because I know he was doing hard work with making the book and there is many funny and laughs. Specially, there have lots of Dev Pilkey’s ideas’ Like, “Flip-O-Rama. It means if. You flip the page, its like animated. (Dev Pilkey’s tip: Try your sound effect!). And have fun adventure!

Hello, Miss Amanda
>>Hello, Miss Amanda.

I'm preparing the passion project.  So I wrote the text for the project.
>> No error.

please check the grammar and spelling mistakes of my passion project.
>>Please check the grammar and spelling mistakes of my passion project.

the title is 'the What is Dat Pilkey'
>>The title is 'What is Dat Pilkey?'

What was Dav Pilkey’s Real Facts?
>>What are some facts about Dav Pilkey?

Dev Pilkey is an American children's writer and illustrator best known for his Captain Underpants book series. He was born David Murray Pilkey Jr. on March 4th, 1966 in Cleveland, Ohio, to David and Barbara Pilkey. 
>> No error.

He attended elementary school in Elyria, Ohio, where he was diagnosed with can’t read long sentence with ADHD.
>>He attended elementary school in Elyria, Ohio, where he was diagnosed with can’t read long sentences with ADHD.

Because he was often reprimanded for his behavior he spent a lot of time at a hallway desk.
>>Because he was often reprimanded for his behavior, he spent a lot of time at a hallway desk.

This is where his Captain Underpants character was created.
>> No error.

As a student he entered his first book titled World War Won in a national contest and won.
>>As a student, he entered his first book titled World War One in a national contest and won.

Part of the prize was having his book published, in 1987.
>> No error.

His many had published.
>>Many copies were sold.

What is Dav Pilkey’s book?
>> No error.
 
Dev Pilkey’s book were famous international book. Which is Captain underpants and Dog Man.
>>Dev Pilkey’s books titled Captain Underpants and Dog Man were famous worldwide. 

But there is more book it’s Mighty Robot, Ook and Gluk, and Super Diaper Baby.
>>But there were more: Mighty Robot, Ook and Gluk and Super Diaper Baby.

Early years book have lot much than international book! (What do you mean by this?)

Why do I like Dav Pilkey’s book?
>> No error.

I really like Dev Pilkey’s book because I know he was doing hard work with making the book and there is many funny and laughs.
>>I really like Dev Pilkey’s book because I know he worked hard to make it and it's really fun to read.

Specially, there have lots of Dev Pilkey’s ideas’ Like, “Flip-O-Rama.
>>It has lots of Dev Pilkey’s ideas such as “Flip-O-Rama."

It means if. You flip the page, its like animated.
>>It means flipping the pages makes it look animated.

(Dev Pilkey’s tip: Try your sound effect!). And have fun adventure!
>>Dev Pilkey’s tip is to try the sound effect and have fun adventures.

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