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1. How could you notice someone is interested in you?

2. I'm fine with caring about my grandfather at hospital

3. Please let me know as any changes

4. That's the problem we haven't dealt with

5. That is realistic problem (how do you understand " realistic problem)

6. Do you know what hurts me the most?

7. What (was/is) the last time you played soccer? is there no diffence (was/is) in this sentence?

8 What is the difference bewteen (It's going to be VS There is going to be

1. How could you notice someone is interested in you?

I Interpret this sentence in two ways. 

- How could you notice if someone is interested in you? (how will you know if someone is interested. "if' implies someone may or may not be interested so you're asking just in case)

- How could you notice someone who is interested in you? (Here there is a definite person who is interested so you're asking about that situation)



2. I'm fine with caring about my grandfather at hospital

(Do you mean"I'm fine with caring for my grandfather?)

"Caring about" means focusing your attention and feelings on something

"Caring for" is taking care of



3. Please let me know as any changes

[/] Please let me know of any changes (let me know when there are changes made)

[/] Please let me know if anything changes (let me know only when something is changed)



4. That's the problem we haven't dealt with

[no error]



5. That is realistic problem (how do you understand " realistic problem)

I interpret this as a problem any person could have. It's something that could likely happen to anyone

Unrealistic problems would include worrying about things like a zombie apocalypse.

 


6. Do you know what hurts me the most? [no errors]



7. What (was/is) the last time you played soccer? is there no diffence (was/is) in this sentence?

The correct wh here would be when because we're talking about time.

(was/is) either can be used depending on the situation of the person

When was the last time implies this person hasn't played in a very long time and they've probably stopped.

When is the last time implies this person may still be engaged in the hobby so he's still doing it present time. 



8 What is the difference bewteen (It's going to be VS There is going to be

When you say "it" there's already a concrete subject being talked about

Ex: it's going to be difficult - There's something that was referred to earlier and now it is the thing which will be difficult.

 

When you say "there's going to be _____" this is a bit more vague 

Ex: There's going to be something difficult - There's something but you don't know what that thing is. It's not definite but you know it will be difficult.


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