I went to a Museum cafe.
There is fantastic and interesting art, and book.
I read 'one piece' comic book at there.
Than I saw media art. that was beautiful.
There are cat in the yard.
So I play with cat.
I want to visit next time.
There is fantastic and interesting art, and book.
I read 'one piece' comic book at there.
Than I saw media art. that was beautiful.
There are cat in the yard.
So I play with cat.
I want to visit next time.
TITLE: Went to a Museum Café
CONTENTS:
I went to a museum café.
There were fantastic and interesting artworks and books.
I read the One Piece comic book there.
Then I saw media art — it was beautiful.
There were cats in the yard, so I played with them.
I want to visit again next time.
EXPLANATIONS:
❌: I went to a Museum cafe
✅: I went to a museum café
Why?
Museum doesn’t need to be capitalized (not a name).
Add the accent mark in café for correct spelling.
❌: There is fantastic and interesting art, and book.
✅: There were fantastic and interesting artworks and books.
Why?
Use were because the story is in the past.
Use plural artworks and books since there were many.
❌: I read 'one piece' comic book at there.
✅: I read the One Piece comic book there.
Why?
Remove at → just say there.
Capitalize One Piece (it’s a title).
Add the before the name of the comic.
❌: Than I saw media art. that was beautiful.
✅: Then I saw media art — it was beautiful.
Why?
Than (used for comparison) → should be Then (for sequence).
Start a new sentence with a capital letter (It was beautiful) or connect with a comma/dash.
❌: There are cat in the yard.
✅: There were cats in the yard.
Why?
Use past tense were (the visit already happened).
Plural form cats, not cat.
❌: So I play with cat.
✅: So I played with them.
Why?
Past tense: played, not play.
Since there were many cats, use them instead of cat.
❌: I want to visit next time.
✅: I want to visit again next time.
Why?
Adding "again" makes the sentence more natural in English.
수강정보
필리핀 화상영어 주 2회 25분 12주
튜터
Crissia
교재
Our World 2B
[주니어]
정규
