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The jobless me actually enjoys Mondays!

The reason is that cafes and libraries are pretty empty on weekdays, so it feels peaceful. Today is the first day!
I went to the cafes to study. I feel at ease during studying.
It was thanks to Monday afternoon. haha

I reviewed my mistakes at the cafe.
one time a week (x) once!! a week
I put a little pepper in.
I need a few minutes.
l drink some(a little) water.
l try to drink 2 liters of! water everyday.
“Few people came.“ means that “Almost no one came.”

I think so, l had our today class at home, so my speaking was a bit relaxed. Whatever I appreciate you managing the class flexibly.

Have a good day~

The reason is that cafes and libraries are pretty empty on weekdays, so it feels peaceful. Today is the first day!
I went to the cafes to study. I feel at ease during studying.
It was thanks to Monday afternoon. haha

I reviewed my mistakes at the cafe.
one time a week (x) once!! a week
I put a little pepper in.
I need a few minutes.
l drink some(a little) water.
l try to drink 2 liters of! water everyday.
“Few people came.“ means that “Almost no one came.”

I think so, l had our today class at home, so my speaking was a bit relaxed. Whatever I appreciate you managing the class flexibly.

Have a good day~

__________

Corrections

 

  • I went to a cafe to study. (not “the cafes”)

  • I feel at ease while studying. (not “during studying”)

  • Once a week. (not “one time a week”)

  • I drink a little / some water. (not “I drink some(a little) water”)

  • I try to drink 2 liters of water every day. (not “everyday”)

  • I had our class at home today. (not “our today class”)

  • Anyway, I appreciate you managing the class flexibly. (not “Whatever I appreciate...”)

Reply
Thank you for sharing. Studying at a cafe on a quiet Monday afternoon really does sound peaceful. I can see you’re putting in effort to review and correct your sentences, well done. I also felt you were more relaxed in class today, and that makes me happy. I appreciate your positive attitude and the way you keep trying to improve. Let’s keep learning together. 


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