I live in suwon now.
The suwon is near in Seoul.
Suwon is known for Suwon Hwa-seong and fastivals.
The Suwon Hwaseoung is a castle and It's Unesco's World Heritage Sites!
The fastivals' name is 'a trip to king Jeong-jo. I like it very much and there is so many people. It takes place every year.
I love suwon.
The suwon is near in Seoul.
Suwon is known for Suwon Hwa-seong and fastivals.
The Suwon Hwaseoung is a castle and It's Unesco's World Heritage Sites!
The fastivals' name is 'a trip to king Jeong-jo. I like it very much and there is so many people. It takes place every year.
I love suwon.
TITLE: I love Suwon
CONTENTS:
I live in Suwon now.
Suwon is near Seoul.
Suwon is known for Suwon Hwaseong and festivals.
Suwon Hwaseong is a castle, and it’s a UNESCO World Heritage Site!
The festival’s name is A Trip to King Jeong-jo. I like it very much, and there are so many people. It takes place every year.
I love Suwon.
EXPLANATIONS:
❌: The Suwon is near in Seoul
✅: Suwon is near Seoul
Why?
Don’t use the before city names.
We say near Seoul, not near in Seoul.
❌: Suwon is known for Suwon Hwa-seong and fastivals
✅: Suwon is known for Suwon Hwaseong and festivals
Why?
Correct spelling is Hwaseong (no dash).
Correct spelling is festivals, not fastivals.
❌: The Suwon Hwaseoung is a castle and It's Unesco's World Heritage Sites!
✅: Suwon Hwaseong is a castle, and it’s a UNESCO World Heritage Site!
Why?
Don’t use The before Suwon Hwaseong.
UNESCO should be all capital letters.
Use World Heritage Site (singular), not Sites.
Don’t use the possessive (UNESCO’s).
❌: The fastivals' name is 'a trip to king Jeong-jo.
✅: The festival’s name is A Trip to King Jeong-jo.
Why?
Correct spelling: festival.
Use singular possessive festival’s.
Titles should be capitalized: A Trip to King Jeong-jo.
❌: there is so many people
✅: there are so many people
Why?
People is plural, so use are, not is.
❌: It’s a castle and It's Unesco’s World Heritage Site!
✅: It’s a castle, and it’s a UNESCO World Heritage Site!
Why?
Grammar needs a comma before and here for clarity. Also fix capitalization and spelling.
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필리핀 화상영어 주 2회 25분 12주
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