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I watched a movie titled ’No other choice’.

This movie is a Korean film that was released today!
I was even more excited because it is made by famous korean director and was invited to the Venice Film festival.
Whatever, a lot of famous korean actors appear in this movie.

Sadly, the story of this movie was less funny than I expected.
But actors’ actings were perfect. I fully focused this movie today. Indeed, I like to enjoy watching movies alone.
Importantly, I don’t watch horror movie alone. haha

Yesterday’s our class, I wondered about edleth’s teaching regarding my speaking error ‘cow meat’. So I listened our call recording, it was ‘cow’s!! meat’. :D l heard ‘couch’. I feel relieved. haha

Have a good night~
zZ

This movie is a Korean film that was released today!
I was even more excited because it is made by famous korean director and was invited to the Venice Film festival.
Whatever, a lot of famous korean actors appear in this movie.

Sadly, the story of this movie was less funny than I expected.
But actors’ actings were perfect. I fully focused this movie today. Indeed, I like to enjoy watching movies alone.
Importantly, I don’t watch horror movie alone. haha

Yesterday’s our class, I wondered about edleth’s teaching regarding my speaking error ‘cow meat’. So I listened our call recording, it was ‘cow’s!! meat’. :D l heard ‘couch’. I feel relieved. haha

Have a good night~
zZ

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This movie is a Korean film that was released today!
I was even more excited because it was made by a famous Korean director and was invited to the Venice Film Festival.
Also, many famous Korean actors appear in this movie.

Sadly, the story of this movie was less funny than I expected.
But the actors’ performances were perfect. I was fully focused on the movie today.
Actually, I like watching movies alone.
But importantly, I don’t watch horror movies alone. haha

In yesterday’s class, I was wondering about Edleth’s correction of my speaking error “cow meat.” So I listened to our call recording, and it was “cow’s meat”! :D I thought I heard “couch.” I feel relieved. haha

Have a good night~
zZ


 

 Reply:


Thank you for sharing your thoughts, Hyang! I’m glad you got to watch a new Korean film on its release day, that must have been exciting, especially since it was made by a well-known director and even reached the Venice Film Festival. Even though the story wasn’t as funny as you expected, it’s great that the actors’ performances impressed you and kept your focus. I agree, watching movies alone can be really enjoyable, but I understand why horror films are different! haha. And about “cow meat,” yes, you did say “cow’s meat,” so no worries at all.  Sleep well and have a good night too! 

 


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