I went a picnic with my friend.
First, I went to the boardgame cafe. At there we played lot of boardgame and ate potato chips, pizza, chicken and ttokbbocki.
Next, we walked at market. And then we take a photo.
Last, we saw some fancy shop. At there I don’t bought any thing.
I‘m very like this picnic very much. I want to do again.
First, I went to the boardgame cafe. At there we played lot of boardgame and ate potato chips, pizza, chicken and ttokbbocki.
Next, we walked at market. And then we take a photo.
Last, we saw some fancy shop. At there I don’t bought any thing.
I‘m very like this picnic very much. I want to do again.
TITLE: Picnic with a friend
CONTENTS:
I went on a picnic with my friend.
First, we went to a board game café. There, we played a lot of board games and ate potato chips, pizza, chicken, and tteokbokki.
Next, we walked around the market. Then we took a photo.
Last, we saw some fancy shops. I didn’t buy anything there.
I really liked this picnic very much. I want to do it again.
EXPLANATIONS:
1. ❌: I went a picnic
✅: I went on a picnic
Why?
We always say go on a picnic, not go a picnic.
2. ❌: At there we played lot of boardgame
✅: There, we played a lot of board games
Why?
Remove at → just There.
Use a lot of (not just lot of).
boardgame → should be plural board games.
3. ❌: we walked at market
✅: we walked around the market
Why?
We usually say walked around/in the market, not at market.
4. ❌: And then we take a photo
✅: And then we took a photo
Why?
Use took (past tense), not take.
5. ❌: we saw some fancy shop
✅: we saw some fancy shops
Why?
Use the plural shops when you mean more than one.
6. ❌: At there I don’t bought any thing
✅: I didn’t buy anything there
Why?
Wrong tense: don’t bought → should be didn’t buy.
any thing → correct spelling is anything (one word).
7. ❌: I‘m very like this picnic very much
✅: I really liked this picnic very much
Why?
"I’m very like" is wrong. The correct past tense is "I liked."
Add "really" for emphasis.
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필리핀 화상영어 주 2회 25분 12주
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Our World 2B
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