I think the light bulb is the greatest invention on earth.
Thanks to my light bulb. It can see me well in the night and in the dark.
At the show it also see the show special. It was interesting.
I can't imagine life with out light bulb.
Thanks to my light bulb. It can see me well in the night and in the dark.
At the show it also see the show special. It was interesting.
I can't imagine life with out light bulb.
TITLE: The Greatest Invention
CONTENTS:
I think the light bulb is the greatest invention on Earth.
Thanks to the light bulb, I can see well at night and in the dark.
At shows, it also makes the performance look special and interesting.
I can't imagine life without the light bulb.
EXPLANATION:
❌: with out
✅: without
Why?
“Without” is one word, not two.
❌: Thanks to my light bulb. It can see me well in the night and in the dark.
✅: Thanks to the light bulb, I can see well at night and in the dark.
Why?
We don’t say “my light bulb” here, since we mean light bulbs in general. Also, “it can see me” is incorrect — we mean “I can see.”
❌: At the show it also see the show special. It was interesting.
✅: At shows, it also makes the performance look special and interesting.
Why?
We change the grammar to make the sentence clear and correct: “makes the performance look special.”
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필리핀 화상영어 주 2회 25분 12주
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Crissia
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Our World 2B
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