But, Eugenia looked like Mercy was a pig.
So, baby Lincoln was sorry to Mercy.
Baby Lincoln gave candy to Mercy.
But Eugenia saw Mercy and she was angry.
I don't like Eugenia, because she is mean and very bad.
I don't want to be alike mean and bad Eugenia.
Mercy went to the treat or treating in Eugenia house.
But, Eugenia looked like Mercy was a pig.
So, baby Lincoln was sorry to Mercy.
Baby Lincoln gave candy to Mercy.
But Eugenia saw Mercy and she was angry.
I don't like Eugenia, because she is mean and very bad.
I don't want to be alike mean and bad Eugenia.
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I appreciate the effort you put into writing this piece. You communicated some excellent concepts, as I can see. However, a few punctuation mistakes need fixing.
To improve the clarity of your sentences, review the verb tenses and subject-verb agreement.
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Mercy went to the trick-or-treat at Eugenia's house.
But Eugenia looked at Mercy as a pig.
So, baby Lincoln feels sorry for Mercy.
Baby Lincoln gave candy to Mercy.
But Eugenia saw Mercy, and she was angry.
I don't like Eugenia, because she is mean and very bad.
I don't want to be mean and bad like Eugenia.
