Deserted Island

If I went to the deserted island.
I would like to bring an ax, a lighter and sleeping bag.
An knife is necessary.
It could protect me and cutting.
I would need to a lighter to stay warm and to cook.
Last is sleeping bag. Because I can’t sleep at ground. But frankly speaking, I don’t want to go there.

• Use “a” instead of “the” — we are not talking about a specific island.
• Remove the period and use a comma because the sentence continues.

• Add “a” before “sleeping bag.”
• Add a comma before “and” in a list.

• Use “a” not “an” before “knife” — because “knife” starts with a consonant sound (/n/).

• You need a verb after “and” — say “help me cut,” not just “cutting.”
• Add “things” to complete the meaning and make the sentence clearer.

• Remove “to” before “a lighter” — it’s not needed.
• Say “cook food” for a complete idea (not just “cook”).

• Add “the” before “sleeping bag.”
• Don’t start with “Because” — connect it with the previous sentence.
• Say “on the ground” not “at ground.”