I want to visit Tanzania

I would like to go to Tanzania.
I am interested in the Tanzania’s national park.
At national park there is sapary (not a zoo).
There are wild animals. For example lions, rhino and elephant.
At sapary, If you are lucky you can see lots of cow and lions are hunting.
I want to see the lions are hunting.
Because I think that was special.
I want to go to Tanzania.

• Remove “the” before “Tanzania’s” — it’s not needed.
• Use “parks” (plural), because there is more than one.

• Use “In” instead of “At” when talking about locations inside places.
• Say “safaris,” not “sapary” — spelling is important.
• Use plural “parks” and “safaris” to match.
• Use “are” instead of “is” for plural.

• Add a colon (:) after “for example” to introduce a list.
• Use plural forms: “lions,” “rhinos,” “elephants.”
• Use commas to separate the animals.

• Say “On a safari,” not “At sapary.”
• Fix spelling: “sapary” → “safari.”
• Use “many” with animals (not “lots of” in formal writing).
• Use “cows” (plural), not “cow.”
• Don’t say “lions are hunting” after “see.” Say “lions hunting.”

• After verbs like “see,” don’t use “are.” Just say “see lions hunting.”

• Don’t start a sentence with “Because” unless it follows another sentence.
• Use present tense “is,” not past tense “was,” because you're talking about now.