Halloween was coming. Mr. Watson and Mrs. Watson thought Mercy's costume.
They decided to dress up Mercy a princess dress and tiara.
Mercy didn't want to dress up a princess dress. So Mr. Watson told about treat. So Mercy wore a princess dress.
When I was in Halloween, I wore witch costume.
Because my favorite Halloween costume is that.
Witch is woman and witch have a broom. I love it.
Mr.watson and Mercy were living in a house at 54 Deckawoo Drive.
Halloween was coming. Mr. Watson and Mrs. Watson thought Mercy's costume.
They decided to dress up Mercy a princess dress and tiara.
Mercy didn't want to dress up a princess dress. So Mr. Watson told about treat. So Mercy wore a princess dress.
When I was in Halloween, I wore witch costume.
Because my favorite Halloween costume is that.
Witch is woman and witch have a broom. I love it.
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Thank you for your effort in writing this composition. I can see that you had some good ideas and tried to express them clearly. However, there are a few grammar and capitalization errors that need to be corrected. Please refer to the following:
Begin every sentence with a capital letter.
Use capital letters for proper nouns (like names of people, places, or holidays).
Review subject-verb agreement and verb tenses to make your sentences clearer.
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Mr. Watson and Mercy were living in a house at 54 Deckawoo Drive.
Halloween is coming. Mr. Watson and Mrs. Watson are thinking about Mercy's costume.
They decided to dress up Mercy in a princess dress and tiara.
Mercy didn't want to dress up in a princess dress. So Mr. Watson talked about the treat. So Mercy wore a princess dress.
When I joined the Halloween party, I wore a witch costume because that's my favorite Halloween costume.
A witch is a woman, and witches have a broom. I love it.
