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It's a heat wave these days. We haven't made any plans for summer vacation yet. I think we'll go to the mountain stream in our town later. I want to splash and swim there. I can go from 13th August because I'll take a test, the national qualification exam for junior high graduation, on 12th August.

It's a heat wave these days. We haven't made any plans for summer vacation yet. I think we'll go to the mountain stream in our town later. I want to splash and swim there. I can go from 13th August because I'll take a test, the national qualification exam for junior high graduation, on 12th August.
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Sentence-by-sentence Corrections:

1. Original: It's a heat wave these days.
   ✅ Corrected: There’s a heat wave these days.
   ✅ Explanation: Use “There’s” (There is) to introduce a current condition or event. “It’s a heat wave” is not a natural construction in English.

2. Original: We haven't made any plans for summer vacation yet.
   ✅ Corrected: We haven't made any plans for summer vacation yet.
   ✅ Explanation: This sentence is already correct!

3. Original: I think we'll go to the mountain stream in our town later.
   ✅ Corrected: I think we’ll go to the mountain stream in our town later.
   ✅ Explanation: This sentence is also fine. No change needed.

4. Original: I want to splash and swim there.
   ✅ Corrected: I want to splash around and swim there.
   ✅ Explanation: "Splash around" is a more natural and common phrase in English when talking about playing in water.

5. Original: I can go from 13th August because I'll take a test, the national qualification exam for junior high graduation, on 12th August.
   ✅ Corrected: I can go after August 13th because I will take the national qualification exam for junior high school graduation on August 12th.
   ✅ Explanation:

   • Use "after" + date to clearly show the time.

   • “August 13th” is the natural word order in English.

   • The phrase is restructured for clarity and formality.

   • “Junior high graduation” sounds incomplete, so “junior high school graduation” is clearer.

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Final Edited Text:

There’s a heat wave these days. We haven’t made any plans for summer vacation yet. I think we’ll go to the mountain stream in our town later. I want to splash around and swim there. I can go after August 13th because I will take the national qualification exam for junior high school graduation on August 12th.