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Today I went to swimming pool. I played with my friends first ,we talked about some games,,,, .We talked and talked .then teacher came .He was teaching swims for free, if we complete the mission we get one cookie, he was very funny. I liked him so much. We met him so much times so we became friends. with teacher, very fun right? My friend and I completed one mission go 5 laps. after that we bragged my another friends. But, they were having so much fun so, yeah you know. after that we played some game like catch and catch. I liked it.

Today I went to swimming pool. I played with my friends first ,we talked about some games,,,, .We talked and talked .then teacher came .He was teaching swims for free, if we complete the mission we get one cookie, he was very funny. I liked him so much. We met him so much times so we became friends. with teacher, very fun right? My friend and I completed one mission go 5 laps. after that we bragged my another friends. But, they were having so much fun so, yeah you know. after that we played some game like catch and catch. I liked it.






 

Today I went to the swimming pool. First, I played with my friends and we talked about some games. We chatted for a while until our teacher arrived. He was offering free swim lessons, and he told us that if we completed a mission, we would each get a cookie. He was very funny, and I liked him a lot.

My friend and I became good friends with the teacher because we saw him so often. Then we accepted a mission to swim five laps. After we finished, we bragged to our other friends, but they were having so much fun that they didn’t mind. Later, we played a game of tag in the water. I really enjoyed it.


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