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I have been worrying about his eyes.
my dog's eyes was bruised and swollen I thought so, we went to see a doctor. my dog was shivering by fearness and then he wad going was so cute i asked the doctor, is it okay to his eyes? i thought he could get pink eyes because of me I didn't take care of his eye's hygenic and health.
the doctor said, it is not your fault most of dogs are having eyes like him because they can't put thier fur away on his own. he just was poked his eyes
I knew it was the symptom of allergy enven thought he didn't get his blood drawn, he just got his blood drawn

I have been worrying about his eyes. ✅
my dog's eyes was bruised and swollen I thought so, we went to see a doctor.= I thought my dog's eyes were bruised and swollen, so we went to see a doctor.

my dog was shivering by fearness and then he wad going was so cute i asked the doctor, is it okay to his eyes? = My dog was shivering with fear, but he was so cute. I asked the doctor if his eyes were okay. 

i thought he could get pink eyes because of me I didn't take care of his eye's hygenic and health. = I thought he had pink eyes because I didn't take care of his eyes properly. 
the doctor said, it is not your fault most of dogs are having eyes like him because they can't put thier fur away on his own. he just was poked his eyes= The doctor said, "It is not your fault since most dogs with eyes like his can't push away the fur from their eyes so it pokes them in the eyes. 
I knew it was the symptom of allergy enven thought he didn't get his blood drawn, he just got his blood drawn = I knew it was an allergic reaction even if he didn't get his blood drawn, but he got his blood drawn anyway. 

 

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Hi Cindy! Too bad about your dog's eyes, but it is good that it is not very serious. 

Perhaps, it might be a good idea to trim the fur around his eyes so it doesn't poke his eyes. 

See you in class! 


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