I knew how she was trying to having a baby, how she want to it. she used to failed to test tube baby sereval times. After knowing it, I felt happy too.I still got some baby stuff that my son was using, I gave her it and new present for baby. She asked me what to need, how guideline to bring up for baby and so on. During we enjoyed our talking topic, I thought when my son was baby.
My friend is having a baby.we gathered together for her pragnant,we celebrated for her .Finally good portion of friends are being mom.
I knew how she was trying to having a baby, how she want to it. she used to failed to test tube baby sereval times. After knowing it, I felt happy too.I still got some baby stuff that my son was using, I gave her it and new present for baby. She asked me what to need, how guideline to bring up for baby and so on. During we enjoyed our talking topic, I thought when my son was baby.
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1. Original:
My friend is having a baby.we gathered together for her pragnant,we celebrated for her.
Corrected:
My friend is having a baby. We gathered to celebrate her pregnancy.
Explanation:
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“we gathered together for her pragnant” → "pragnant" is a misspelling of pregnant, and the sentence is awkward. We typically say “celebrate her pregnancy.”
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“we celebrated for her” → "celebrated her" is more natural in this context.
2. Original:
Finally good portion of friends are being mom.
Corrected:
Finally, a good number of my friends are becoming moms.
Explanation:
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“good portion” → more natural expression is a good number of.
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“are being mom” → should be are becoming moms (ongoing change).
3. Original:
I knew how she was trying to having a baby, how she want to it.
Corrected:
I knew how hard she tried to have a baby, and how much she wanted it.
Explanation:
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“trying to having” → wrong verb form. Correct is tried to have.
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“she want to it” → needs subject-verb agreement (wanted it), and “to” is unnecessary.
4. Original:
she used to failed to test tube baby sereval times.
Corrected:
She had failed at in-vitro fertilization (IVF) several times.
Explanation:
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“used to failed” → incorrect tense. Use had failed for past experiences.
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“test tube baby” is outdated/awkward → use in-vitro fertilization (IVF).
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“sereval” → typo for several.
5. Original:
After knowing it, I felt happy too.
Corrected:
When I heard the news, I felt happy too.
Explanation:
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“After knowing it” is unnatural. Use When I heard the news or When I found out.
6. Original:
I still got some baby stuff that my son was using, I gave her it and new present for baby.
Corrected:
I still had some baby items my son used, so I gave them to her along with a new gift for the baby.
Explanation:
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“got” → past tense not appropriate here. Use had.
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“her it” → unnatural. Should be gave them to her.
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“stuff” → better to say items, and add clarity with new gift.
7. Original:
She asked me what to need, how guideline to bring up for baby and so on.
Corrected:
She asked me what she might need and how to raise a baby.
Explanation:
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“what to need” → correct: what she might need.
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“how guideline to bring up” → unclear phrasing. Use how to raise a baby.
8. Original:
During we enjoyed our talking topic, I thought when my son was baby.
Corrected:
While we were talking, I thought about the time when my son was a baby.
Explanation:
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“During we enjoyed” → should be While we were talking.
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“thought when my son was baby” → needs article “a” and complete structure: thought about the time when...
Final Edited Text
My friend is having a baby. We gathered to celebrate her pregnancy. Finally, a good number of my friends are becoming moms.
I knew how hard she tried to have a baby and how much she wanted it. She had failed at in-vitro fertilization (IVF) several times. When I heard the news, I felt happy too.
I still had some baby items my son used, so I gave them to her along with a new gift for the baby. She asked me what she might need and how to raise a baby. While we were talking, I thought about the time when my son was a baby.
