My favorite food is bibimbap.
Because there is lots of vegetables and put red chili paste. It’s little hot.
But the most favorite bibimbap is my granma’s.
Because she’s vegetables are fantastic. So they get rid of my stress.
I love bibimbap.
Because there is lots of vegetables and put red chili paste. It’s little hot.
But the most favorite bibimbap is my granma’s.
Because she’s vegetables are fantastic. So they get rid of my stress.
I love bibimbap.
My Favorite Food
My favorite food is bibimbap. It has lots of vegetables and red chili paste, which makes it a little hot. But my favorite bibimbap is my grandma’s. Her vegetables are fantastic, and they help me get rid of my stress. I love bibimbap.
1. ❌: My favorite food is bibimbap. Because there is lots of vegetables and put red chili paste. It’s little hot.
✅: My favorite food is bibimbap. It has lots of vegetables and red chili paste, which makes it a little hot.
Why?
- Use “has” to talk about what bibimbap contains.
- “Because” should be part of the same sentence to avoid starting a new sentence without a subject.
- Add “which” to connect the idea that the chili paste makes it hot.
2. ❌: But the most favorite bibimbap is my granma’s.
✅: But my favorite bibimbap is my grandma’s.
Why?
- "Most" is unnecessary here; “favorite” already means the best.
- Correct the spelling of “granma” to “grandma”.
3. ❌: Because she’s vegetables are fantastic.
✅: Her vegetables are fantastic.
Why?
- Use “her” instead of “she’s” to show possession (the vegetables belong to her).
4. ❌: So they get rid of my stress.
✅: And they help me get rid of my stress.
Why?
- Use “and” to connect the idea to the previous sentence.
- “Help” sounds more natural here than “get rid of”
수강정보
필리핀 화상영어 주 2회 25분 12주
튜터
Crissia
교재
Our World 2A
[주니어]
정규
