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Is it OK to judge people based on our first impressions

I think judging people based on first impressions is not okay. And here’s why.Firstly we can only see superficial factors. For example, when we see a handsome man, we can only know that he is handsome. We can’t know his personalities or characteristics. Secondly,person’s personality can be changed. For example, when a quiet girl comes to our classroom, we might think she is a quiet and negative girl, but she might be active after a few days. Thirdly, our thoughts can be affected by superficial factors.

I think judging people based on first impressions is not okay. And here’s why.Firstly we can only see superficial factors. For example, when we see a handsome man, we can only know that he is handsome. We can’t know his personalities or characteristics. Secondly,person’s personality can be changed. For example, when a quiet girl comes to our classroom, we might think she is a quiet and negative girl, but she might be active after a few days. Thirdly, our thoughts can be affected by superficial factors.

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CORRECTION:

I think judging people based on first impressions is not okay, and here’s why.

Firstly, we can only see superficial factors. For example, when we see a handsome man, we only know that he is handsome, but we can’t know his personality or character.

Secondly, a person’s personality can change. For example, when a quiet girl comes to our classroom, we might think she is shy or negative, but she might become active after a few days.

Thirdly, our thoughts can be affected by surface-level things. For example, when we see an unattractive boy, we might think he won’t be a good student, even though we don’t know anything about him.

Lastly, many people believe that first impressions are usually accurate, but that’s not always true. Some people may not look impressive at first, but they have good character. On the other hand, some people may seem nice at first, but their true personality is not good.


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