I search about richest people in the world.
Richest is elon mosk who make tesla and spaceX.
I am surprised that he has more then 300,000,000,000 dollar
Next is maker and CEO of amazon
He had 232,100,000,000 dollar
it is interesting that it is different as 100,000,000,000 dollar
Third is mark who is finder of facebook a social media platphom
and he has 201,700,000,000 dollar.
When I search it I want to be rich like them so I will practice a work and
be popular and rich.
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Corrected paragraph:
For this task, we were asked to search for something we’re interested in and share what we found.
I decided to seach about the richest people in the world.
First is Elon Musk. He is the richest person and is known for creating Tesla and SpaceX.
I was really surprised to find out that he has more than 300 billion dollars!
Next is the founder and CEO of Amazon. He has around 232 billion dollars.
It’s interesting that there’s about a 100 billion dollar difference between him and Elon Musk.
The third person is Mark Zuckerberg, the founder of Facebook, a social media platform. He has about 201 billion dollars.
After researching this, I felt inspired. I want to be successful like them someday, so I will work hard, improve my skills, and maybe one day, I can also become rich and make a difference.
