I plant my Tomato. Because at school I learn practical course.
I learned about How to grow Tomato and then I plant it.
I named it. It was 'my sweet tomato snack'.
A few days after, There was a shoot.
I will grow the shoot and I will eat it! 'yum^^'
I learned about How to grow Tomato and then I plant it.
I named it. It was 'my sweet tomato snack'.
A few days after, There was a shoot.
I will grow the shoot and I will eat it! 'yum^^'
Tomato
I planted my tomato because at school I learned a practical course.
I planted my tomato because at school I learned a practical course.
I learned how to grow tomatoes, so I decided to plant one.
I even gave it a name: “My Sweet Tomato Snack.”
A few days later, a shoot appeared!
I’m going to take care of the shoot and grow it.
One day, I’ll eat it — yum! ^^
1. ❌: I plant my Tomato. Because at school I learn practical course.
✅: I planted my tomato because at school I learned a practical course.
Why?
Use past tense: "plant → planted", "learn → learned"
"Because" should be part of the same sentence.
No big "T" in "tomato".
2. ❌: I learned about How to grow Tomato and then I plant it.
✅: I learned how to grow tomatoes, so I decided to plant one.
Why?
No big "H" in "how".
Say "tomatoes" (many), not "tomato".
"I plant" → "I decided to plant" = past tense and better English.
3. ❌: I named it. It was 'my sweet tomato snack'.
✅: I even gave it a name: “My Sweet Tomato Snack.”
Why?
"Gave it a name" = more natural.
"Even" shows you are happy or excited.
Use [“ ”] , not [‘ ’].
4. ❌: A few days after, There was a shoot.
✅: A few days later, a shoot appeared!
Why?
"Later" is better than "after" here.
No big "T" in "there".
5. ❌: I will grow the shoot and I will eat it! 'yum^^'
✅: I’m going to take care of the shoot and grow it. One day, I’ll eat it — yum! ^^
Why?
"Take care of" = help it grow.
"One day" = future. Not now.
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필리핀 화상영어 주 2회 25분 12주
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Crissia
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Our World 2A
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