Last year, korea announced a healthcare reform policy.
Medical students, interns,residents objected.
School classes have stopped since March last year.
Now the medical reform policy is canceled.
I think the class will start soon.
I hope to graduate from medical school this year.
And I want my daugher to be a doctor next year.
My daughter is a medical school senior. ✅
Last year, Korea announced a healthcare reform policy. ✅
Medical students, interns,residents objected. = Medical students, interns, and residents objected.
School classes have stopped since March last year. ✅
Now the medical reform policy is canceled. ✅
I think the class will start soon. = I think the classes will start soon.
I hope to graduate from medical school this year. And I want my daugher to be a doctor next year. = I hope my daughter can graduate from medical school this year, and I want her to be a doctor next year.
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Hi Challina!
You did a great job in this composition! There were minor corrections due to conjunctions and pluralization. Keep up the good work!
It is nice that your daughter can resume her classes and graduate soon. Best of luck to her! :)
