I am going to family trip for 1 weeks to Spain. There is the place where I always want to go. I considered to trip for a while. because after took a ticket, suddenly my son got fever and had a bad caught 5days ago. Fortunately as took a medicine as his fever was gone. It was just fever through from sore throat. We almost cancel. We plane will arrive at evening. It is good having a trip because school allow to go to trip with family limited to 14days. I hope we have great healing time safety.
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Original:
I am going to family trip for 1 weeks to Spain.
Corrected: I am going on a family trip to Spain for one week.
Explanation:
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“going to” → “going on” (we say “go on a trip”)
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“family trip” needs an article: “a family trip”
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“1 weeks” → “one week” (agreement: singular form with “one”)
Original:
There is the place where I always want to go.
Corrected: It’s a place I’ve always wanted to visit.
Explanation:
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“There is the place” → sounds unnatural; better: “It’s a place…”
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“always want to go” → needs present perfect for a long-time desire: “have always wanted”
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“go” → “visit” fits better for a travel context
Original:
I considered to trip for a while.
Corrected: I considered the trip for a while.
Explanation:
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“considered to trip” is incorrect. “Consider” is followed by a noun or gerund, not an infinitive.
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“trip” should be preceded by “the”
Original:
because after took a ticket, suddenly my son got fever and had a bad caught 5days ago.
Corrected: Because after we bought the ticket, my son suddenly got a fever and had a bad cough five days ago.
Explanation:
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“after took a ticket” → incorrect verb form. Use “after we bought the ticket”
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“got fever” → should be “got a fever”
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“caught” → should be “cough” (wrong word used)
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“5days” → “five days” (spelling and spacing)
Original:
Fortunately as took a medicine as his fever was gone.
Corrected: Fortunately, after taking medicine, his fever went away.
Explanation:
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The structure was awkward and grammatically incorrect. Rewritten for clarity
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“as took a medicine” → “after taking medicine”
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“was gone” → better to say “went away” in this context
Original:
It was just fever through from sore throat.
Corrected: It was just a fever caused by a sore throat.
Explanation:
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“just fever” → needs article: “just a fever”
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“through from” → unnatural phrasing; better: “caused by”
Original:
We almost cancel.
Corrected: We almost canceled.
Explanation:
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“cancel” → needs past tense: “canceled”
Original:
We plane will arrive at evening.
Corrected: Our plane will arrive in the evening.
Explanation:
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“We plane” → should be “Our plane”
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“at evening” → correct preposition is “in the evening”
Original:
It is good having a trip because school allow to go to trip with family limited to 14days.
Corrected: It’s good to take a trip because the school allows family trips for up to 14 days.
Explanation:
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“It is good having a trip” → better: “It’s good to take a trip”
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“school allow” → needs subject and verb agreement: “the school allows”
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“to go to trip” → should be “family trips” or “to take a trip with family”
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“limited to 14days” → rephrased for clarity: “for up to 14 days”
Original:
I hope we have great healing time safety.
Corrected: I hope we have a safe and healing trip.
Explanation:
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“great healing time safety” is unclear and ungrammatical
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Rephrased naturally: “a safe and healing trip”
Final, Edited Version:
I am going on a family trip to Spain for one week. It’s a place I’ve always wanted to visit. I considered the trip for a while because after we bought the ticket, my son suddenly got a fever and had a bad cough five days ago. Fortunately, after taking medicine, his fever went away. It was just a fever caused by a sore throat. We almost canceled. Our plane will arrive in the evening. It’s good to take a trip because the school allows family trips for up to 14 days. I hope we have a safe and healing trip.
