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Day at the school.

there was a lot of things at school today.
First, i went to school and I saw that my friend was sad. so told him "why are you sad?" He told me nothing and just sitting ,so ,I decided to find out
why he is sad
First of all, I told to my teacher" why does my friend is sad?" teacher told" I don't know." teacher said .I was surprised, because I thought my teacher will know, because she knows everything about students. I asked friends teachers but, its all same so, I gave up.

there was a lot of things at school today.
First, i went to school and I saw that my friend was sad. so told him "why are you sad?" He told me nothing and just sitting ,so ,I decided to find out
why he is sad
First of all, I told to my teacher" why does my friend is sad?" teacher told" I don't know." teacher said .I was surprised, because I thought my teacher will know, because she knows everything about students. I asked friends teachers but, its all same so, I gave up.
 

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There were a lot of things at school today. First, I went to school and saw that my friend was sad. So, I told him, "Why are you sad?" He told me nothing and just sat there, so I decided to find out why he was sad.

First of all, I asked my teacher, "Why is my friend sad?" The teacher told me, "I don't know." I was surprised because I thought my teacher would know since she knows everything about her students. I asked my friend's teachers, but they all said the same thing, so I gave up.


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