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I had a stomachache.

When I was get up in the morning.
I have a very hot fever.
My stomache is not good so I go to see a doctor.
In fact, I am hate of ate medisen.
I ended up ate medisen. but I throw up the medisen.
I don't know why I'm in stomachache. but I think the swimming pool water did it.
I don't want catch stpmachache.

TITLE:  I had a stomachache.

CONTENT:
When I got up in the morning, I had a very high fever.
My stomach didn’t feel good, so I went to see a doctor.
Actually, I hate taking medicine.
I ended up taking medicine, but I threw it up.
I don’t know why I had a stomachache, but I think the swimming pool water caused it.
I don’t want to get a stomachache again.


EXPLANATION:
“When I was get up” → “When I got up
➤ We say “got up” because it already happened.

“I have a very hot fever” → “I had a very high fever”
➤ Use “had” (past) and “high fever” is the right way to say it, not “hot fever.”

“My stomache is not good so I go” → “My stomach didn’t feel good, so I went”
➤ “Didn’t feel good” is how we say we feel bad.
➤ Use “went” because it already happened.

“I am hate of ate medisen” → “I hate taking medicine”
➤ Say “I hate taking medicine” – this is the correct way.

“I ended up ate medisen” → “I ended up taking medicine”
➤ After “ended up,” use “taking,” not “ate.”

“but I throw up the medisen” → “but I threw it up”
➤ Use “threw up” (past tense). Also, “it” sounds better than repeating “medicine.”

“I don’t know why I’m in stomachache” → “I don’t know why I had a stomachache”
➤ Use “had” because it happened before.

“I don’t want catch stpmachache” → “I don’t want to get a stomachache again.”
➤ We say “get a stomachache”, and “again” makes the meaning clearer.

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