I visit my friend house

I visit my friend house today. First, we decorate diary.
I like decorate diary with my friend.
Second, we watch the TV.
The channel is Minions. And we drank mango smoothie.

I visit my friend house today. = I visited my friend's house today.

First, we decorate diary. = First, we decorated our diaries.
I like decorate diary with my friend. = I like decorating diaries with my friend.
Second, we watch the TV. = Second, we watched TV.
The channel is Minions. = The show we watched was Minions. 

And we drank mango smoothie. ✅

 

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Hi Ella!

Good job in continuing to write compositions! 

Make sure to be careful about tenses. Use the past tense when telling of past events. 

Keep it at! :) 

-t.Mischa