Holiday

There are Children's day and Buddha's birthday during the holidays.
This Thursday is parents' Day.

My family gathered during the holiday.
We ate at a nice restaurant.
I got a gift for sunglass.
I visited my husband's family home with him.
I had a great time during holidays.

There are Children's Day and Buddha's birthday during the holidays. ✅
This Thursday is Parents' Day. ✅

My family gathered during the holiday. ✅
We ate at a nice restaurant. ✅
I got a gift for sunglass. = I got a pair of sunglasses as a gift. 
I visited my husband's family home with him. ✅
I had a great time during holidays. ✅

 

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Hi Challina!

It sounds like you had a wonderful time. :)

You did a great job with this composition! You mostly made correct sentences.

Just watch out for capitalization and the phrasing in the edited sentence.

See you in class! ~ Mischa :)