Sometimes each day between in a school anniversary and weekend or korea event , it has a long holiday by principals opinion. It is a time now. We ready planed a trip plan for last week of months. so it was not somethings . Wolmi park is amusement that located near in inchen. When someone come to inchen trip it's one of attractions. We can see sea and take a criuse, .And there are street stage of some shows. As I am inches citizen I used to recommend there to friends. My son and I went to there .
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Here are the corrections:
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Original: Sometimes each day between in a school anniversary and weekend or korea event , it has a long holiday by principals opinion.
Corrected: Sometimes, when a school anniversary falls near a weekend or a national holiday in Korea, schools have a long break based on the principal’s decision.
Explanation:-
"each day between in" is awkward and ungrammatical. Rephrased for clarity.
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"korea" → capitalized to "Korea."
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"it has a long holiday" → unclear subject. Clarified with "schools have a long break."
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"by principals opinion" → corrected to "based on the principal’s decision" (grammar and phrasing).
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Original: It is a time now.
Corrected: That time is now.
Explanation: More natural phrasing in English. -
Original: We ready planed a trip plan for last week of months.
Corrected: We already planned a trip for the last week of the month.
Explanation:-
"ready planed" → corrected to "already planned."
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"trip plan" → redundant; simplified to "a trip."
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"last week of months" → corrected to "last week of the month."
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Original: so it was not somethings.
Corrected: So it wasn’t a big deal.
Explanation: "not somethings" is unclear; rephrased to a natural expression. -
Original: Wolmi park is amusement that located near in inchen.
Corrected: Wolmi Park is an amusement park located near Incheon.
Explanation:-
"is amusement" → incomplete; changed to "is an amusement park."
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"near in inchen" → corrected to "near Incheon."
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Original: When someone come to inchen trip it's one of attractions.
Corrected: When someone comes to Incheon, it’s one of the main attractions.
Explanation:-
"come to inchen trip" → rephrased to "comes to Incheon."
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"it's one of attractions" → corrected to "one of the main attractions" for natural flow.
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Original: We can see sea and take a criuse, .And there are street stage of some shows.
Corrected: You can see the sea, take a cruise, and enjoy street performances.
Explanation:-
"see sea" → added "the" for clarity.
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"criuse" → spelling corrected to "cruise."
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"street stage of some shows" → rephrased to "street performances."
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Original: As I am inches citizen I used to recommend there to friends.
Corrected: As a citizen of Incheon, I often recommend it to friends.
Explanation:-
"inches" → corrected to "Incheon’s" or "of Incheon."
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"used to recommend" → changed to "often recommend" for present action.
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Original: My son and I went to there.
Corrected: My son and I went there.
Explanation: "went to there" is incorrect—just say "went there."
Final Edited Text:
Sometimes, when a school anniversary falls near a weekend or a national holiday in Korea, schools have a long break based on the principal’s decision. That time is now. We already planned a trip for the last week of the month, so it wasn’t a big deal. Wolmi Park is an amusement park located near Incheon. When someone comes to Incheon, it’s one of the main attractions. You can see the sea, take a cruise, and enjoy street performances. As a citizen of Incheon, I often recommend it to friends. My son and I went there.
