It was my birthday. My husband asked for dating for birthday without my son. Back then He was in academy for 2 hours. It was also possible adding 30 minutes more this is because he have to take a shuttle bus come and go. We went to cafe have no kids. I hoped go there. since I with my son I didn't go there. I lost my necklace that I got a wedding gift from myhusband.I don't where did it go. I felt frustrated. So he bought gift me . In the evening my son brought mini cake using his pocket money's.
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Here are the corrections:
1. Original: It was my birthday.
✅ Corrected: It was my birthday.
Explanation: This sentence is already correct.
2. Original: My husband asked for dating for birthday without my son.
✅ Corrected: My husband asked to go on a birthday date without our son.
Explanation: "Asked for dating" is not natural in English. We say “go on a date.” Also, “our son” sounds more natural and inclusive.
3. Original: Back then He was in academy for 2 hours.
✅ Corrected: At that time, he was at the academy for two hours.
Explanation: “Back then” needs context, and “academy” usually means a private class in Korea—use “at the academy.” Always spell out numbers in general writing and lowercase "he."
4. Original: It was also possible adding 30 minutes more this is because he have to take a shuttle bus come and go.
✅ Corrected: We could also add 30 more minutes because he had to take a shuttle bus to and from the academy.
Explanation: This sentence was a bit long and unclear. “He have” should be “he had,” and “come and go” is better expressed as “to and from.”
5. Original: We went to cafe have no kids.
✅ Corrected: We went to a kid-free café.
Explanation: “Have no kids” is unnatural—“kid-free” is the right expression. Don’t forget the article “a” before “café.”
6. Original: I hoped go there.
✅ Corrected: I had hoped to go there.
Explanation: After “hope,” use “to + verb.” Since it’s in the past, “had hoped” is appropriate.
7. Original: since I with my son I didn't go there.
✅ Corrected: I couldn’t go there before because I was always with my son.
Explanation: This needs a subject and verb—“I was with my son.” Also, add a connector for better flow.
8. Original: I lost my necklace that I got a wedding gift from myhusband.
✅ Corrected: I lost the necklace I got as a wedding gift from my husband.
Explanation: Use “as a gift” and fix the spacing in “myhusband” to “my husband.”
9. Original: I don't where did it go.
✅ Corrected: I don’t know where it went.
Explanation: Use proper word order in indirect questions: “I don’t know where it went.”
10. Original: I felt frustrated.
✅ Corrected: I felt frustrated.
Explanation: This sentence is fine.
11. Original: So he bought gift me.
✅ Corrected: So he bought me a gift.
Explanation: Word order is incorrect—“bought me a gift” is the natural phrasing.
12. Original: In the evening my son brought mini cake using his pocket money's.
✅ Corrected: In the evening, my son bought a mini cake with his pocket money.
Explanation: “Brought” should be “bought,” and “money’s” is incorrect—just say “pocket money.”
Final Edited Version:
It was my birthday. My husband asked to go on a birthday date without our son. At that time, our son was at the academy for two hours, and we could even add 30 more minutes since he had to take a shuttle bus to and from the academy. We went to a kid-free café that I had hoped to visit. I hadn’t been able to go before because I was always with my son. Sadly, I lost the necklace I had received as a wedding gift from my husband. I don’t know where it went, and I felt frustrated. So, my husband bought me a gift to cheer me up. In the evening, my son bought a mini cake with his pocket money.
"Happy birthday, Ms. Yoon! I hope your special day was filled with love, thoughtful surprises, and sweet moments with your family. You deserve all the happiness in the world!"
